Dynasty cow

Nates mine you over confident swine , hey Nate hes nothing compared to me plus hes all wrinkly and he collects carboard boxes , how sad is that ! welcome ...

you dont realy love me , you dont even know me , i know you dont love me cause of me bieng a beetle collecter,and the fact that im addicted ...

stuff about me you should know , is that , well kinda dogy , the other day i stabbed my brother to get to a can of beans . i ...

i was gona read it but its too long , nice name though

all the kids bully me cause of my snout and furry nose , at play time i roam around sniffing people hoping that this action will score me a friend ...

my name , not important . my game , sheperding pigs . my dream , that one day when i am a wrinkly old man that collects beetles i will ...

You sound like a realy nice guy , infact , err.. will you marry me , i have a pet beetle hehehe hes called bone head

The plot was good , so was the plot but you should have put more discription . i would expect much less from a 16 year old (you,meaning that your ...